Tuesday, May 15, 2018

TUE: Documentary Festival & Featurette Planning Week


No Computers
Warm-up: Featurette Exemplars

Learning Target(s)
  • I can independently produce an 'engaging' short film
Announcements 
Agenda [60]
  • Featurette Exemplars [10]
  • Watching the Documentaries [50]
    • Partial rubric for watching
      • Story & other positives ( ➕➕➕ )
        • The "Research Grade"
          • Topic research is plainly evident in the film
          • Interviews/Opinions are used to illustrate research & serve to deepen understanding
          • Viewer learns something new about the topic, person, or place that is the subject 
        • The "Technical Grade"
          • Editing pays attention to rules and serves to move the story along, provide interest
          • Voiceover is clear
          • Voiceover delivery is fluid
          • Where possible, footage is framed, steadied, and lit appropriately for the setting and purpose
          • B-roll effectively used to move narrative along
          • Keynote is appropriately utilized to further understanding of the documentary topic
        • The "Artistic Grade"
          • Has beginning, middle, end
          • Writing is fluid and appropriate for the medium of film
            • does not sound like you are reading a school paper
          • Interviews, if any, are integrated into the flow of the story/argument instead of being segregated together (unless masterfully done on purpose to artistically further the narrative)
          • Music, if any, furthered the narrative
          • Balanced
            • Interviews v. Voiceover v. silence/music
            • Spoken v. Visual information
          • Documentary was Entertaining / Moving / Inspiring
      • Areas for improvement (⚠️⚠️⚠️ )
        • Lighting Problems
          • backlit
          • too dark (grainy?)
          • too light (blown out)
        • Sound problems
          • cutting off words
          • music over words
          • unintelligible words
          • wide swings in volume
          • too much background noise
        • Filming/Framing problems
          • no "rule of 3" (unless clearly intended)
          • distracting background
          • Jittery camerawork
          • repetitive angles for b-roll (or any footage)
        • Inappropriate B-Roll
          • Doesn't match subject or soundtrack
          • clearly added to "pad" the time
          • ridiculous, offensive, or careless 
        • Script problems
          • No script evident - voiceover was freestyled
          • Interviews inappropriate, repetitive, 
        • Editing problems
          • clips too long - not enough b-roll
          • too much 'borrowed' footage
          • Footage out of order (confuses "point")
          • poor choice of titles 
            • distracting 
            • 'wrong' for the information conveyed 
          • poor choice of adjustments:
            • filters & effects
            • speeds
        • Careless Problems
          • spelling errors
          • thumbs not cropped out
          • "title text here"

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